Monday, December 1, 2008

editorials in school.

In my journalism class we've been learning how to write editorials and usually kids give a quick boo hoo when it comes to writing, but my classmates, as well as myself became quickly fascinated with writing editorials.
I wrote an editoral on how dumb boys are. Yeah, I know so typical, but I had a bast writing this paper.
soooo I decided to share my writing..



“I was just f*****’ them girls, I was gon’ get right back,” Jay z, rapper and businessman, said in the 2001 hit single, “Song Cry”. In the song, Jay z was expressing his feelings on how he felt after his foolish actions resulted in his girlfriend leaving him.
The reason girls either ignore boys or leave them alone is due to the fact that boys do stupid things.
Many girls argue that when boys do stupid things such as love taps and footsies, it’s cute and that they love the attention. However, girls who find this cute and attractive are as idiotic and immature as the boys who do it.
When guys use tired, old, lame pick-up lines to “bag” girls, it’s the most stupid thing ever. For instance, if a guy walks up to you and says, “Hey, I’m looking for treasure, can I look around your chest?” you can’t help but stand there and jut feel sorry for the poor child. Or how about, “The word of the day is ‘legs’. Let’s say we head back to your place and spread the word?” see now it’s okay to give him a good slap in the face. How’s that for a love tap? Pick-up lines are useless and don’t impress girls.
Sometimes when a boy is constantly harassing and hovering over a girl, it could be quite annoying, if you ask me. Girls jut need their space sometimes and boys who violate that space can be pains in the (you-know-what).
When boys act like “little boys”, it’s not cute. For instance, when you want to spend time with you boo and he’s playing wrestling with a bunch of boys, it’s not cute and type suspicious.
Also when guys try to act tough to impress a girl, he does everything but impress her. Let’s say he’s leading his girl on that he’s this big, strong man, and then this guy comes along and wants to fight him, then what happens? That tough guy image quickly disappears and the b**** in him is revealed.
Boys do not get any play when they act dumb. If boys would man-up and be real, they’d
actually get somewhere in life.


soooo like what do you think.??

other topics we wrote about was Biracial Couples, Statutory Rape, and the new school in our school building for kids with Autism. We really got into this topic.. =)

2 comments:

Leah Janell said...

lol dont let these boys upset you to be honest no matter how old you get you will see the same problems men and just not as matter as women period...

Eb the Celeb said...

lol... back in college I wrote a piece called Why is it that boys that was too about how dumb dudes are.
I was also a journalism major. and like leah said... the older you get the more problems they will have